May 26, 2008

Flickering
FOUND by Darcy in Chicago, Illinois
Found three years ago.
The Captain in Tenille
the flickering light of a candle.
is like a junkie cooking up in the bathroom at 4 AM.

the flickering light of a candle.
is a grim reminder that time is marching on.
while I stand still.
+ May 26, 2008 12:15 AM +
Night in gale
The flickering light of a candle is like a firefly flitting around the yard where we play flashlight tag on a warm summer, suburban Chicago evening.
+ May 26, 2008 12:30 AM +
Effie in Oxfordshire
The flickering light of the candle is like a memory I nearly forgot.

The flickering light of the candle is like your breathing in the night
+ May 26, 2008 12:36 AM +
the man behind the curtain in oz
the flickering light of a candle is like democracy

the flickering light of a candle is like your heart signal to me from a thousand miles
+ May 26, 2008 01:21 AM +
Holly the Homemaker in Toronto

The flickering light of a candle is like blood, pumping through my veins.

The flickering light of a candle is like a soft, cool, breeze over a calm lake.
+ May 26, 2008 03:05 AM +
Jonathan in too many operas
Captain, in renaissance paintings the flickering light of a candle is a symbol of the transience of earthly things (there's usually a skull and a musical instrument in the picture -- sounds vanish too -- and sometimes a crumbling manuscript or a fading flower or an hourglass runnning out. Try 'vanitas' on Google Images and you'll see what I mean).

Nightingale and Effie and Holly, those are beautiful reactions, thank you.

Not wishing to pour cold water on your poetic transports, but this is like an operatic aria -- the baritone says 'Ooh look, the candle's flickering', and the soprano says 'Ah, the flickering light of a candle: the flickering light of candle is like...' and we're off.

It happens in Wagner a lot -- Siegfried goes on about his mother, Tristan about the sad tune he heard as a child; even Benjamin Britten does it in Peter Grimes ('Embroidery in childhood')... It gets so that you can see it coming and you say 'please... don't go there' -- but they always do.

Not that I'm cynical about my job or anything.
+ May 26, 2008 04:24 AM +
mona lisa in the louvre
the flickering light of a candle is like the love you thought was forever. blown out with a quick breath
+ May 26, 2008 04:55 AM +
mona lisa in the louvre
jonathan, have you seen that thing on youtube, cafeteria musical, where the workers sing about napkins?
+ May 26, 2008 04:55 AM +
Darcy
HOLY SHIT YOU HAVE MY NAME. hahaha. it's not that common a name, so it's extra cool. i'm glad my name isn't ashley or brianna, or something like that.
+ May 26, 2008 05:31 AM +
lars in all my forms in the nwc?
the flickering light of a candle is like the years that pass so quickly as your children grow up; hold on and let go.
+ May 26, 2008 06:03 AM +
Erp in Burp
Anybody else think this is the handwriting of a seriously disturbed child?
+ May 26, 2008 07:12 AM +
Freonz freak in g hallucinations
@Erp, no, not really. I know adults with worse handwriting.

The flickering light of the candle is like passing windows at night. The flickering light of the candle is like deciding wrong or right.
+ May 26, 2008 07:29 AM +
Smallbear in the Cave
The flickering light of a candle
is a memory I nearly forgot.
A passing
moment. A frozen
sensation
now melting.

A whispered secret
the touch of the dead
my mother's breath.
+ May 26, 2008 09:27 AM +
Chrome Toaster in in the moode to contemplate freedom
If the flickering light of a candle is like the freedom of life, does that mean that the author sees his/her "freedom of life" as a tentaive, guttering, inconstant thing? Gone in an instant, leaving you in the dark if you laugh, or make the wrong move.


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+ May 26, 2008 09:28 AM +
Schneh
The flick'ring light of a candle
is the feathered bonds between us,
my slip-grip on reality's collar -
the ship's anchor losing hold
and sailing straight for celestial gold.
+ May 26, 2008 11:05 AM +
Christina in Illinois
My brain activity is not stable enough (just got up) to participate, but I do love this find and all of your replies.
+ May 26, 2008 11:42 AM +
Clover in the dark afternoon
Oh.. you guys are great! My candle just isn't flickering today.

@Chrome, we did thank a Veteran this morning. We don't do that every day, but we should. Thanks for the reminder.
+ May 26, 2008 01:12 PM +
Marc in England
That note is beautiful.
+ May 26, 2008 01:55 PM +
Schneh
Oh hey, oh hey! I just noticed - what's that vertical writing on the back side of the page say? My brain sees something like "emergence", but I'm not sure I trust it.
+ May 26, 2008 04:33 PM +
Lance Pants in a trance
Wow, everyone's waxing poetic today.

The flickering light of a candle is like...a flame....burning...on a candle. Brightly!
+ May 26, 2008 05:22 PM +
Samantha in Lafayette, IN
The flickering light of a candle is like
the flutter in my throat.
Quick, darling-- snuff me out.
+ May 26, 2008 05:44 PM +
abby in maryland
the flickering light of a candle is the last source of light when all else has failed. its you.
+ May 26, 2008 05:45 PM +
T. in the world
The flickering light of a candle
all that's between you and me
our eyes shine in the tentative light -
one breath or whisper too loud,
and the flame sputters out.

The flickering light of a candle
the wick sending up wisps of smoke
the wax pooling in liquid form,
dripping onto the table.

The flickering light of a candle
decades from now,
will anyone but the very old
know what that sentence means?
will bright young faces frown
when presented with that line -
trying to connect something so fragile
with the buzzing electric bulbs
that are the only light they know?
+ May 26, 2008 07:33 PM +
C in clearly
With all due respect to the good efforts in the responses, the original is a truly poetic and artistic vision.
+ May 26, 2008 09:31 PM +
my friend flicker
the flickering light of a candle really pisses me off when it's those trick re-lighting candles. the flickering light of a candle reminds me that I forgot to pay the power bill.

+ May 26, 2008 11:00 PM +
Spider Gomez in astoria, Oregon
the flickering light of a candle is like when the power goes out during a typhoon.

okay guys..wheres the new one?
+ May 26, 2008 11:08 PM +
Jess in Lewes
The flickering light of a candle is like the fact that I can't grasp anything to say...

Favourited.
+ May 27, 2008 05:25 AM +
mona lisa turn in g her head sideways
Schneh, i saw that too. can't make it out.
+ May 27, 2008 06:57 AM +
someonewonderful
My thoughts are with the tree.
+ May 27, 2008 08:35 AM +
daisymae051479 in Marion, IN
The flickering light of the candle is like the delicacy of life.

The flickering light of the candle is like our love, when we are both too proud and headstrong to see past the moment.

The flickering light of the candle is like the memories of of you, my dear child; Eighteen precious years have passed while you have grown, and, looking back, they seem just the sputter of a flame; far too brief and far too few to vanquish the darkness that is the life I knew before you grew inside me and that I fear will return to me as you are off in the world.

The flickering light of the candle is like my memory each day - it comes and goes and never gets bright when I need it the most.

+ May 27, 2008 09:27 AM +
Chris in Canada
The flickering light of the candle is
hope, fear, love
ready to be snuffed out at the first strong breeze
or to burn stronger, longer than ever hoped for
+ May 27, 2008 11:04 AM +
jennie in the garden of oblivion
The flickering light of a candle is the realization that love is a convenience for some and a sound heart-trampling for others. Painful as it is, I prefer the latter. Pain trumps ignorance every time. Take that, candle!
+ May 28, 2008 04:24 PM +
yummy yummy in in my tummy
like, totally deep man
+ May 28, 2008 08:38 PM +

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